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Old January 16th, 2001, 11:41 AM
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Wow we got few Poetic Minded Folks in Echarca!

Hey Brother/Sisters:

Its been a while I am posting something on Echarcha! To be honest I was visiting but never felt like expressing something! Lately I founded few guys here likes poetry too so thought of starting this thread.

Music, Poetry and Art etc. are better at lest they reach beyond culture language and faith. So I think if there are few folks who wish to take this thread further and churn out some good Charcha on sweet world of poetry.

On my personal note I like mostly Ghalib and then Iqbal (no indi or paki crap here, remember he was the one who gave us SARE JANAH SE ACCHA!). There are others too who are best there own way of expression.

I think brother Sutradhar will have a chain ki sans kuch hatke topic shuru karo yaar. lol

Let me hear if you guys know any sher which expresses immense joy feeling while being with your love!

I will start; this classic is from Ghalib:

Un Ke Dekhe Se Jo Aa Jati Hai Mou Pe Raunak
Who Samajte Hai Ke Bimar Ka Haal Accha Hai

Challenged with Urdu? I can try to help!

Phir milenge…


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Old January 16th, 2001, 11:51 AM
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Talking Har kisi ke under ek shayar betha he

yaar simplehuman bhai,

such me yaar ek sakun sa mila kuch naya padkar, but why should we only go for sher or Kavita from somebody else (like Ghalib), why dont we put some words from ourselve, Can u please slightly modify original thread, so anybody who ever written or try to write some line can come up with his telent.

Writing my own two lines......
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Old January 16th, 2001, 12:15 PM
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Wink SimpleHuman nice to have you back

Humse kya khaata huey,
Ki aap yaha ka raasta bhool gaye?

Hope you still enjoy eCharcha.Com and all the [echarchans] here.

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Old January 16th, 2001, 12:44 PM
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Thumbs up Sahi Kehte Ho!

Bilkul Shai Kaha Proud Bhai. Hum sub me aik shayar maujood hai. (Typically comes out while Bathing I belive... lol)

You see its good to see if some guys try to pen down some of there lines lets see are we in making of some Great Shayar along the way!

At the same time those great Shayar like Galib are tuff to be repeated coz they where natural and genioun. I use to do lot of sher shairi while I was at my Municipal School in Bombay, ah GOOD OLD DAYS!!!

Remember this?

Hum Ne Unko Dekha Angle Badal Badal Ke
Answer: Hum Ne Unko Mara Sendal Badal Badal Ke... lol

And Thanko bhery much for such a sweet Welcome Back Message Sutradhar Bhai. Let me try to say that in Marathi : Maja Hridaye Khus Zhala! I said that correct eh?

So long..
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Old January 16th, 2001, 01:32 PM
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wah wah,
kya baat hain, bahoot khoob. Ab koe interesting topic aaya hain, baki toh kya hain, naukri bachane ke chakkar mein itne mashgool aur pareshaan hote hain ke yeh desh videsh, jaati praanti aadi ke masle soch vichar karne ka dil nahi karta.
Par din bhar zindagee se hairan kuch khushgawaar pal mile uskee ummeed dikhayee detee hain

toh eesee zindagi pe arz hain (irshaad irshaad)

gaamein zindagi se vaada kar gaye thee panchve din ka,
kisi se sun liya hoga ke zindagi char din kee hain.

bus aisee baaton se dil behla lete hain par aksar toh aage gum, peeche gum aur kabhie kabhie khushee ka sawaan.
Aur zindagi kat tee jaatee hain. Par samay hee nahi milta kayee saari baaton ke liye. Jaise ke Harivansh rai sahab ne farmaya ke
Jeevan kee aapa dhaapi mein
Kab vaqt mila kuch der kahi baith,
Yeh soch saku...
Jo kiya kaha maana
Usmein kya bura bhala......

Interesting one, its a joy to listen to the whole poem in Amit's voice
Kehne ko toh bahut dil kar raha hain par voh kehte hain naa.....

Insaan ke chahato kee intihaa hee nahi koe
Do gaz zameen bhee chahee, Do gaz kafan ke baad.

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Old January 16th, 2001, 01:37 PM
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Woh aaye humhaare ghar khuda ki kudrat
bohat hui teri kudrat
kalti ki kataa abb ticket....

chaand sa tera takla,husn jaise aloo
photo mein dikhaayi hirni palle baandh diya bhaalu
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Old January 16th, 2001, 01:56 PM
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ek sher sunaata hoon zara gaur se suniye
ek sher sunaata hoon zara gaur se suniye
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Old January 16th, 2001, 02:27 PM
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I like this one by Salim Raza. Enjoy!

tujhe pyaar aaye kisee pay kab
taira har sitam hai so bay-sabab
taira aur zamaanay kaa aik Dhab
tairee har adaa maiN wahee ghazab

magar aye haseena-e-naazneeN
mujhay tujh say koee gilaa naheeN

tairee bay-rukhee bhee qubool hai
kay yeh apnay dil kaa usool hai
too nigaah-e-shoq kee bhool hai
taira aitebaar fazool hai

magar aye haseena-e-naazneeN
mujhay tujh say koee gilaa naheeN

taira husn fitna-e-dahar hai
taira rang aag kee lahar hai
tairee ankhReeoN maiN jo zahar hai
woh balaa hai, zulm hai, qahar hai

magar aye haseena-e-naazneeN
mujhay tujh say koee gilaa naheeN

taira husn mahv-e-jafaa sahee
yeh jafaa bhee tairee adaa sahee
yeh adaa, wafaa kaa silaa sahee
yeh silaa hee mairee qazaa sahee

magar aye haseena-e-naazneeN
mujhay tujh say koee gilaa naheeN


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Old January 16th, 2001, 02:31 PM
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Here is my contribution

But before we continue further, let me remind you that http://www.gandmasti.com has an excellent shayri section

Laloo Bhai bihari
Went up the pahari
To fetch a bail for court order
Laloo fell down
And lost his crown
But Rabri reigned thereafter.

Wha Wha Black Sheep
Have you pulled the wool?
Yes sir, Yes sir,
Three bags full.
One for my father,
One for my dame,
And one for the CBI
Crying in the lane.

Little Miss Bharti,
Did a Maha-arti,
So the BJP would always hold sway.
There came a big BSP With
Mayavati its USP.
And frightened Miss Bharti away.

Little Lal Advani
Sat with his TV vahini
Taking his party's rai
He stuck out his thumb,
hoping to pull out the plum,
And said, 'Can I have a slice of Vaj-pie?'

Batsman-bowler sat on the ball.
Batsman-bowler had a great fall,
All the bookies' cookies,
All the bribers' men,
Couldn't put Indian cricket together again.

Bankers and ministers,
Sold for a penny
All the swindlers are so many
The envy's green
And the CBI red's
Nail them all, and get
their head, head, head.

Hey public diddle,
Each state has a fiddle,
The corruption's gone over the moon.
The people weep to see what's done
And the politician runs away with the goon
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Old January 16th, 2001, 02:35 PM
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chuTkiyaaN le ke tum rulaate ho
gud_gudaao to koi baat bane

kitni aaNkhoN meN teri masti hai
dag_ma_gaao to koi baat bane

"huqqa" piite ho piichhe chilman ke
ghuR_ghuRaao to koi baat bane

ban ke bijli to roz girti ho
ghaR_ghaRaao to koi baat bane

hamko maqtal meN khiiNch laati ho
ghar bulaao to koi baat bane
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Old January 16th, 2001, 02:40 PM
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Cool The original one is as follows by Ustad Raj Kumar Pathria

That was a good one spunky

maan jaao to koi baat bane'
lauT aao to koi baat bane.

ik bure khwaab ne jagaayaa hai
tum sulaao to koi baat bane.

maujeN gin gin ke umr kaT bhi chuki
Doob jaao to koi bat bane.

aur kab tak tasalli doge mujhe?
ab rulaao to koi baat bane.

lutf kya hai sitam men gairoN ke?
aap Dhaao to koi baat bane.

arz sun kar vo kuchh nahiN detaa
giDgiDaao to koi baat bane.

shaam-e-gham hai, koi mazaak nahiN
jaam uthao, to koi baat bane.

waqt-e-rukhsat jo tum bhi thoDa sa
phaDphaDaao to koi baat bane.

ham ko jo kuchh chhupaanaa paDta hai
jaan jaao to koi baat bane.

Ayesha apni is tajassus se
baaz aao to koi baat bane.
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Old January 16th, 2001, 02:49 PM
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Thumbs up Wah Wah kya baat hai...

Maja aa gaya dosto! This thread is heating up. I am trying to catch hold of one old gun! he has lot of comedy shairi hope I will if so then you will laugh a lot PROMISE!

In mean while on said by my late Father:

Biwi Ki Zaidad Hon Baccho Ka Karz Hon
Mera Wajood Mujh Me Hi Bikhar ke Reh Gaya

DAD! I know you where gr8.

Lot coming...
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Old January 16th, 2001, 03:15 PM
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SH, bring some more, I havent got the funny ones. Mostly am in this kinda mood

un se nain milaakar dekho
ye dhokhaa bhii khaa kar dekho

duurii mein kyaa bhed chhipaa hai
isakii khoj lagaakar dekho
[bhed = rahasya, secret]

kisii akelii shaam kii chup mein
giit puraane gaakar dekho

aaj kii raat bahut kaalii hai
soch ke diip jalaa kar dekho

jaag-jaag kar umr kaTii hai
niind ke dvaar hilaakar dekho
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Old January 17th, 2001, 06:57 AM
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Smile ok a good old one

Let there be you, let there be me
Let there be oysters, under the sea.....
Let there be wind, an occasional rain...
Chilli con carne, sparkling champagne.
Let there be birds, to sing in the trees
Someone to bless me, whenever I sneeze,
Let there be cuckoos, a lark and a dove....
But first of all please -- let there be love!
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Old January 17th, 2001, 07:19 AM
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Talking Hey Smarty how about this!!!

This is is in very typical Indian Hydrabadi Slang:

Pesh haiN Khwa-ma-khwah Hyderabadi:

Ye soncha tha ke ghar se bhag kar shadi rachaenge
Magar jab waqt aaya to na wo nikli na ham nikle

Suna hai raste hi meiN police ne dhar liya unko
Hamare dil pe jab karne ko wo mashq-e-sitam nikle

Dimagh unka to dekha, aur dil ki bhi talaashi li
Kayi pistol nakhroN ke, kayi ghusse ke bam nikle

bam = bombs

Jhagad kar jab kaha begum ne ghar se jaane ko
Bahut be-abroo ho kar khud apne ghar se ham nikle

Jo hota aur koi to nikal jata wo ghusse se
Magar ham ba-dil-e-nakhasta ba-chasm-e-nam nikle

Hamara hausla to dekhiye ke lunch khate hi
Dinner tak ham nahiN lautenge, ye kha kar qasam nikle

Magar jab sham se pehle hi bhuke pet laut aaya
Wo taana deke boli aap to sabit-qadam nikle

pet = stomach, sabit-qadam = resolute, determined, steadfast

Zamaane ke sataaye haiN, jo logoN ko hasate haiN
Kureda jab bhi dil unka, hazaroN gham hi gham nikle

kureda = explore

Budhape meiN meri khwa-ma-khwah hai khwahish
Ho ghar meiN biwiyaN itni ke har biwi pe dam nikle

Kya khayal hai sarkar! lol
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