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Old October 2nd, 2010, 07:19 AM
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Trending Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

वह कहत,
अधरम बढ़त जब-जब,
हम परकट !


अखयन कम ?
नयन ख़तम ?
यह वकत सखत,
तवम न अवगत ?!
चल हट!
तवम असत!
न करत,
बस कहत,
फकत !


हरपल, हरदम,
ग़म बस गम !
हर जगह छल कपट,
लगत यह - सब जन,
मत गय मरत !


धन कम पर,
न कम खपत !
समधन, हमदम,
सब गयत भग!
नयन बनत जल तट !
सनशय, सनशय, सब तरफ !
मन भय - परलय कब ?!


कम यह सबब ?
भगवन !
अब यह हद !


अगर,
अब न परकट,
तब कब ?


वद ! वद !



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Old October 2nd, 2010, 07:21 AM
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

नयन जल भरत,
टपक टपक बहत,
हरदय करत दरद,
अनवरत !


सब कहत,
वह बस - अप गरज,
पर,
यह मन,
न सहमत !


करत नटखट वह,
हम फसत !


हम कहत कहत थकत,
यह मगर, हठ करत,
बस खट -पट , खट- पट,
सतत !


हर बखत,
बस यह रट,
"दरसन ! दरसन !"


बस एक झलक,
फकत,
कमबखत !
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Old October 2nd, 2010, 07:22 AM
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

ek aur ...

यह मन चनचल !
भगत इधर उधर,
सब तरफ,
हर वखत !


रत जग जग,
करत सब करतब,
उपदरव ,
बस न पढ़त !


हम कहत कहत थक,
मगर यह,
समझत कब ?

समभल !
अब पल सनकत !
बच सक बच !
हमर ब्रह्म अस्त्र !
कल प्रशन पत्र !


अचरज ?
अब हतभरत ?!
नटखट !
अब मज चख !
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Old October 2nd, 2010, 08:27 AM
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

wow!!Awesome!! You should publish these poems.
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

wah wah!!
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Old October 2nd, 2010, 09:58 AM
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

yaar i am so poetically challenged man . kuch summary milega kya bol raha hai yeh
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Old October 2nd, 2010, 12:52 PM
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you... very good!!
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

मतलब तो बस इतना है जय पाई,
की जिसको न आई समझ कविताई,
उसको न समझा सकती खुदाई,
चाहे कितना भरकस जोर लगाईं,

अगर अब भी बात समझ न आई,
तो भी ग़म है जामने में भाई,
कहो खुदसे - हटाओ ये तूतियाई,
और अपने काम में लग जाओ भाई ...
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

No words. 5 stars for this thread and +reps coming your way.
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Thank you .. puri tarah samajh gaya ....
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this is great, nothing less
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

english translations please... it will take me hours to read in hindi
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

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मतलब तो बस इतना है जय पाई,
की जिसको न आई समझ कविताई,
उसको न समझा सकती खुदाई,
चाहे कितना भरकस जोर लगाईं,
अबे कविता की बात कर रहा है या टट्टी की?
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ek aur ...

यह मन चनचल !
भगत इधर उधर,
सब तरफ,
हर वखत !


रत जग जग,
करत सब करतब,
उपदरव ,
बस न पढ़त !


हम कहत कहत थक,
मगर यह,
समझत कब ?

समभल !
अब पल सनकत !
बच सक बच !
हमर ब्रह्म अस्त्र !
कल प्रशन पत्र !


अचरज ?
अब हतभरत ?!
नटखट !
अब मज चख !
I found this one most interesting.Here is its translation -

This heart is restless.
Keeps running away
everywhere.

Keeps awake whole night
does all kinds of things
but does not study.

I am tired of speaking to it.
But it does not understand.

Be cautious!
Time is passing by.
save yourself if you can.
Tomorrow we have an exam.

Surprised?
and confused?
You hoodlum.
serves you right.


Well certainly translations takes away some of its meaning - probably Khaski can translate better and more accurately.
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Re: Bina Matra Ki Kavita !

you are really talented khaski pai

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