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Old August 16th, 2015, 10:06 AM
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My Bold Erotic Shairy

There should be one sub board for "your own poetry or shairy " In poetry section ..... cause I am going to post here my own bold and erotic shairy .
Hope mods will think about it or make my thread sticky so I an post my work
in that one thread ...............................................................................
aaj ki raat bhi kat gai meri siskiun ahoon mein
aaj bhi nah pa saki mein panah uski bahon mein

raat bhar karwat pe karwat mein badalti rahi tanha
toot te badan ko masalne wala door tha door hi rah

nagodi dhalti jawani ke bhi hein kuch armaan
kiya kahoon kiya karoon mein bhi hoon insan

apne aap se hi mein kab tak khailti rahoongi
uski judai ka dukh kab tak mein jhailti rahongi

ab bhi mein hoon ussi ki ,mere jazbat ka gar kare ehsaas
uski bahon mein simat jaon mein woh gar aajay mere paas

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Old August 16th, 2015, 11:03 AM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Beautiful. Is this your original work or did you tepofy from some other site? If so, please provide source.
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Old August 16th, 2015, 11:26 AM
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Beautiful. Is this your original work or did you tepofy from some other site? If so, please provide source.
It is my work .I am also in other forums too .
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Old August 16th, 2015, 01:09 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Seemaji,.. Lo,..aap toh bhai, kuchh achha-khaasa shayarana andaz se, dher-sayana likh jo leti hai,..

maan gaye,.

well, here is da problem, This was an internet crush, a while ago when I saw her in first pic,.. could ya make some kuchh
khoob-soorat, bahe-jabeen, bahe-tareen kuchh,... u know,... .... deel-lubhavak, panktiyaan,..... that I can forward her in SMS? Pyaar ka iizhaar kar le shakun,.. thanks.



Maherbaani hogi,.. if ya helped me out.


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Old August 16th, 2015, 01:14 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Koshish kee thii,.. aisi dau-char sunaayi bhi thii,. magar mem-saab ko pasand nahin aayi,.. bole ki, yeh toh suni huyi hai, kuchh naya likho,..




miltay hi kuch kuch hone lagta hai mere mann mein
kaisa nasha hai mere mehboob tumhare badan mein

choo laite ho jab tum mere jism ko piyar ke sath
kis khubi se khelte ho tum iss jism e beqarar ke sath

choom kar tum mujhay aik nai duniya puncha detay ho
kuch hosh nahein rehta muihe tum akher kiya chahte ho

bekal ho jati hoon mein apne aap mein nahein rehti
sharam ati hai apni hajat issi liye khud nahein kehti

jo hay tumhare sath woh hai mere liye woh mujhe de do
jo rakhi hai mere paas tumhari amanat hai woh tum le lo

hath laga ke dekhti hoon tu mera mann lalchata hai
andar daal deite ho tu qarar mera badan paata hai

phool ban ke khill uthti hai ho jati hai khush
tumhare har ik daao ka jawab deiti hai pur josh

jab pilaa deite ho tum issko apna rass ho jati hai sairab
apna rass tumhare rass mein mila ke khush hoti hai janab

sach hai tere mere milaap se hum pe aik nasha ccha jata hai
gar meri ruh wa jism pata hai taskeen tu tum ko bhi mazza atta hai

tujh ko hai meri zaroorat tu mujhe tumhari zaroorat rehti hai
aik dooje ka saath nibhaaein hamesha ,yahi mubbat kehti hai

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Opper rakh ke jab tum phislaate ho tu shock hota hai
andar lene ke liye tu dil bechain wwa bebaak hota hai

bina ghilaf ke dalo maza nahein ata kuch hone ke dar se
ghilaaf pehna ke jo karo andar tu maza khak hota hai

maza tu pa leiti hoon mein apne aap ko chho kar bhi
magar tum se karwane ka maza khaas al khaas hota hai

jab bhi utro vadi mein tu zara si ehtiyat kiya karo
tum kiya jano pehla jhatka kitna dardnak hota hai

jab ho jaao ghar mein dakhel tu kuch der ruka karo
yun jaldi se baher aa jana tu khatranak hota haota

phir kabhi jaldi kabhi hole hole kabhi zor se aage peeche
apna khel jam kar khelo jiss ka anjam khawabnak hota hai

jab samjho phislan ho gai hai bahut ziyada tu mere sathi
khushk kar liya karo dono ko , kapda bhi rakha paas hota hai

thori tasali se aur poore ehtmaad ke sath mere jism se khelo
aurat ki nah ho sake tasalli tu mard k liye sharamnak hota hai

rakh ke andar apna khel khela karo tum mere sare baddan se
issi talab ke hathon jal jal ke mera jazba raakh hota hai

chahti hoon tod dalo tum mera badan apni mazboot baon mein le ke
toot te rehne mein hi hai meri baqa ,issi liye tu badan mein lachak hota hai

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Old August 16th, 2015, 03:10 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Yeh sab meri hi shairy hai ....... aur bhi bhaut kuch post karongi .
yeh picture bhi mein hi use karti hoon iss waqt bhi 2-3 forums par yahi pic hai . mera khiyal hai yahn bhi yahi pic up load karoon .
thanks for keeping my work .






Please dont use big fonts

Last edited by swami; August 16th, 2015 at 03:23 PM. Reason: Please dont use big fonts
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Old August 16th, 2015, 03:13 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

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Originally Posted by Mihir15 View Post
Koshish kee thii,.. aisi dau-char sunaayi bhi thii,. magar mem-saab ko pasand nahin aayi,.. bole ki, yeh toh suni huyi hai, kuchh naya likho,..




miltay hi kuch kuch hone lagta hai mere mann mein
kaisa nasha hai mere mehboob tumhare badan mein

choo laite ho jab tum mere jism ko piyar ke sath
kis khubi se khelte ho tum iss jism e beqarar ke sath

choom kar tum mujhay aik nai duniya puncha detay ho
kuch hosh nahein rehta muihe tum akher kiya chahte ho

bekal ho jati hoon mein apne aap mein nahein rehti
sharam ati hai apni hajat issi liye khud nahein kehti

jo hay tumhare sath woh hai mere liye woh mujhe de do
jo rakhi hai mere paas tumhari amanat hai woh tum le lo

hath laga ke dekhti hoon tu mera mann lalchata hai
andar daal deite ho tu qarar mera badan paata hai

phool ban ke khill uthti hai ho jati hai khush
tumhare har ik daao ka jawab deiti hai pur josh

jab pilaa deite ho tum issko apna rass ho jati hai sairab
apna rass tumhare rass mein mila ke khush hoti hai janab

sach hai tere mere milaap se hum pe aik nasha ccha jata hai
gar meri ruh wa jism pata hai taskeen tu tum ko bhi mazza atta hai

tujh ko hai meri zaroorat tu mujhe tumhari zaroorat rehti hai
aik dooje ka saath nibhaaein hamesha ,yahi mubbat kehti hai

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Opper rakh ke jab tum phislaate ho tu shock hota hai
andar lene ke liye tu dil bechain wwa bebaak hota hai

bina ghilaf ke dalo maza nahein ata kuch hone ke dar se
ghilaaf pehna ke jo karo andar tu maza khak hota hai

maza tu pa leiti hoon mein apne aap ko chho kar bhi
magar tum se karwane ka maza khaas al khaas hota hai

jab bhi utro vadi mein tu zara si ehtiyat kiya karo
tum kiya jano pehla jhatka kitna dardnak hota hai

jab ho jaao ghar mein dakhel tu kuch der ruka karo
yun jaldi se baher aa jana tu khatranak hota haota

phir kabhi jaldi kabhi hole hole kabhi zor se aage peeche
apna khel jam kar khelo jiss ka anjam khawabnak hota hai

jab samjho phislan ho gai hai bahut ziyada tu mere sathi
khushk kar liya karo dono ko , kapda bhi rakha paas hota hai

thori tasali se aur poore ehtmaad ke sath mere jism se khelo
aurat ki nah ho sake tasalli tu mard k liye sharamnak hota hai

rakh ke andar apna khel khela karo tum mere sare baddan se
issi talab ke hathon jal jal ke mera jazba raakh hota hai

chahti hoon tod dalo tum mera badan apni mazboot baon mein le ke
toot te rehne mein hi hai meri baqa ,issi liye tu badan mein lachak hota hai

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yeh meri hi poems hein ...... seema kaur . nazia naazo aur ab seema naaz mein hi hoon . thanks
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Old August 16th, 2015, 03:20 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Please guid me how I can post images with my shairy as I am posting in other forum . thanks in advance

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Old August 16th, 2015, 03:26 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

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Please guid me how I can post images with my shairy as I am posting in other forum . thanks in advance
Thank God you dont know to post images

And please do not litter the forum with images like some are doing.

This saturday we are on a clean up drive,so be careful of what you post
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Old August 16th, 2015, 03:31 PM
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Yeh sab meri hi shairy hai ....... aur bhi bhaut kuch post karongi . yeh picture bhi mein hi use karti hoon iss waqt bhi 2-3 forums par yahi pic hai . mera khiyal hai yahn bhi yahi pic up load karoon . thanks for keeping my work .
Please dont use big fonts
^^ lolololol. Toh, matbal ki,.. aap apne-aap ko bade jald se pahechanti bhi leti ho,..Mohtarmaa .... .. ( j/k )

Khair,.. ham toh manzeel dhundh ne nikle the,..
pata nahin, ratsa khud manzeel ban kar saamne aa jaaye toh,... aise moke par shayad kya bola jaata hoga,..... i'm still scratching my head.....

I am still watching and searching what BIG B speaks,..
w/ those KAT-Big B-SRK show on KBC video,. where ameet saheb speaks something,...

Haadsa Banke Koi Khawab Bikhar Jaye To Kya Ho,
Waqt Jazbaat Ko Tabdeel Nahi Kar Sakta,
Dur Ho Jane Se Ehsaas Nahi Mar Sakta, blah blah blah,...

Anyway, Seemaji ham aap ki sab poem par chuke hai,.... kaafi bar dekh li gayi hai,... koi naya nahin hai,..

iidhar aap khud bhi padh sakti hai, aur apne aap ko dekh bhi sakti ho,.. j/k

http://www.funonthenet.in/forums/ind...256353.70;wap2

http://www.tagged.com/profile.html?uid=6032827516

I will take it off yr photo, ( I don't think it's yrs own, Rt? )
unless you wanna have it, since you keep it in other webs too,...

..

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Old August 16th, 2015, 04:57 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

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It is my work .I am also in other forums too .
It is decent, but i dont find anything bold and erotic about it (thats why i call it decent)
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Old August 16th, 2015, 05:25 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

So, who is this Rushna or Jushna Begum?

Are you fan of her ?

who is she?

https://twitter.com/jushnabegum
click

Yr Urdu shayaris are not erotic or vulgur,
its’ just .... kabeer-meera-tulsi-sur ke prem-geet type
but in hindi-urdu labz…

Badhaayi ho, congratulation,.. aap achha-khaasa, itna sundar, bahoot-kuchh likh jo shakti hai,... insaan ko, koi shaukh toh hona hi chahiye,..

Try writing some funny and humorous poems like this lady,..
see my below post..

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Old August 16th, 2015, 05:28 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

0.
And,.. sure Hasya Kavita mela is considered never complete, until Kavi Sampat honors the stage.
So ?
Chale aaoo. Sampathji,..... stage is yours.
http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v=7OY7CHorsyc

1.
Few Moments with Archana !
Archana recited a poem "naukri ki tokri', a comedy depicting her experiences with the many jobs she tried,
as an immigrant woman trying to balance her job and family.
http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v=b9W1j5NCy9s

2.
People call him,.. Ved prakash Ved, and
here he delivers a Shudhdha ( Pure ) Hasya-Kavita on the Title " Milaavat " ! - Gaur Keejeeyega.
Ved Prakash Ved - Hasya Kavita -3 - YouTube

3.
Hasya Kavita with Surindaer Sharma:
( Counter is set - do not move counter )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rX0ZvmM54FM&t=23m49s
Full show is here, on FULL screen.
http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v...M54FM&t=23m49s

4.
Desh-daaz and Vatan-parasthi in comic slapping sense ! :
Poet Neeraj Puri :
A Comedian Poet said it all, at IIM Ahmedabad in a Poem
about the Tiffin Bomb.
( a good message and a Tight slap for the corrupted News-Media, Terrorists, Johnny Gaddars, and among all,.... the Namak-Halaali of the Bomb itself ! )
IIM Ahmedabad : A Comedian Poet on Tiffin Bomb !

http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v...=results_video

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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

I think you guys do not like bold and erotic poetry . so thats ok with me . bye bye
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Ms. Naaz aap toh khaa-m-khaa naaraaz ho gayi, what I meant was,

web pe jo poorani 20-25 kab ki chhapi pari hai,... sab ne aisi kayi dekh li-sun li hai,...

koi naya walla ho toh sunaavo,

iirshad hai,...( in advance ) n' agar hamaari "waah" mein, jo yadi, lakhon taaliyon ki gunj naa sunaayi dewe, toh ham apna naam badal dewe...
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