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Old August 16th, 2015, 08:13 PM
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Don't listen to these guys Seema. You keep
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Old August 16th, 2015, 08:45 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Hhaahha hhaaa Look who is speaking, Seema ji.

Ask her to explain any of your poem's few lines !

Bole toh,.......... vaat jaane ke em chhe ne ke,...aa amara aashika ben chhe ne,
Madras thi chhe, toh, 'Hindi - Urdu' mein haath jara tight hai !
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Old August 16th, 2015, 08:55 PM
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I think you guys do not like bold and erotic poetry . so thats ok with me . bye bye
I believe you. Please continue.
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Old August 17th, 2015, 10:35 AM
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I think you guys do not like bold and erotic poetry . so thats ok with me . bye bye
No, you do not have to go, Seenanazuk tai... stay, read. You will find my poetry wonderful too... along similar lines like yours. Search for "saneless musings" or "saneless rantings" or both... can't remember the thread title. But my shayari is also of the same category... hope you will enjoy.
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Old August 17th, 2015, 10:39 AM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

^^ Neki aur poochh-poochh, paaji?

have a good time,.. N'joy the show...

http://www.echarcha.com/forum/showthread.php?p=661457
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Old August 17th, 2015, 12:35 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

Your attempts at erotic poetry are rather erratic I must say.
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Old August 17th, 2015, 12:40 PM
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Your attempts at erotic poetry are rather erratic I must say.
shayari should be written as shayari , not as shairy . for some reason i am removing s from it and thinking 'hairy' . and then i am thinking of ..........
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shayari should be written as shayari , not as shairy . for some reason i am removing s from it and thinking 'hairy' . and then i am thinking of the pubic hair of seema naaz....
We could actually be twins... for that thought
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Old August 17th, 2015, 02:52 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

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It is my work .I am also in other forums too .
Very interesting. Your poetry is bold and uninhibited. I like it.

apne aap se hi mein kab tak khailti rahoongi
uski judai ka dukh kab tak mein jhailti rahongi
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Old August 17th, 2015, 05:16 PM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

^^ Perhaps answer was already pre-given by KAT :

Kisi aur ki muj ko zaroorat kya,..... Main toh khud se pyaar jataavun !
My name is Seema,....................Seema ki Jawaani !

I'm too sexy 4 ya,....................... Main tere haath naa aani !

Did not Seema Devi had already warn us in advance ?... It's erotica ! Ek saali bas, hamaare palle hi, baat hi nahin padi !

Lo,... aab Bhugato !

કવિ કાલિદાસ જી,........ આને આપ, આપ નું "શાકુન્તલ" જ સમજો !
દુષ્યંત - શકુંતલા ની પ્રણય-ગાથા !

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Old August 18th, 2015, 08:07 AM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

I was watching TV and saw so many reality show
Saala hindustan mein Nachaiye, Gavvaiye aur shayar jyada paida hote hain

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Yeh sab meri hi shairy hai ....... aur bhi bhaut kuch post karongi .
Shayari aapki ho yah borrowed, bahut hi ghatiya hai. Problem is probably that it is neither downright erotic nor has full upscale shayarana andaaz.

Try to focus on smaller moments or feelings. And the dard, pain, pleasure of those, rather than a general trope-ish 'virah ki aag'
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Old August 18th, 2015, 09:43 AM
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Jeetiaf :

The reason being, India a very populated nation with less space, less resources, and more people and hence we never had enough, gymkhana, swimming pools, tennis courts, shooting courts, every home, a TT tables, hockey and soccer fields and bowling and skiing, skating and tons of other such adventurous games, hobbies, and all diff sports activities facilities,.. Hence we remained almost zero in Olympics, FIFA and such,.. and the whole
weightage was given to two religions only,..

Cricket
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Bollywood...

Today, out of 200+ diff soaps on TV, there would be hardly any TV show which may not be promoting 'jaane-anjaane - mein ' the film stars, dialects, songs and all those BW related stuff,..

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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

MV ji,.
aap ne toh Seema ji ko, ekdum Hero se bilkul Zero kar diya,... Not fair

http://www.funonthenet.in/forums/ind...=256353.0;wap2

In the upper left corner, arrows are there, did u switch all pages and read her all shayaris,.. ?

Seemaji, aap woh jis ki fan hai,.. koi parichay nahin diya gaya ! Who's she?
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