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Old August 18th, 2015, 08:39 AM
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Re: My Bold Erotic Shairy

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Originally Posted by Seema Naaz View Post
Yeh sab meri hi shairy hai ....... aur bhi bhaut kuch post karongi .
Shayari aapki ho yah borrowed, bahut hi ghatiya hai. Problem is probably that it is neither downright erotic nor has full upscale shayarana andaaz.

Try to focus on smaller moments or feelings. And the dard, pain, pleasure of those, rather than a general trope-ish 'virah ki aag'
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