kids feeling.........

[Shadab]

Divorce ke baad bachchoo ki feeling.........

maa,maa kahan ho tum
kahan ho tum maa
kabse pukaar raha hun
kabse raah dekh raha hun
mujhe chhodkar tum kahan chali gayi
aisa lagta hai meri parchhayi hi chali gayi
har vaqt vaqt ka ehsaas nahi hota mujhe
har vaqt vaqt apna ehsaas nahi karata mujhe
maa tumhi to ek meri apni thi jisse main baat karta tha
tumhi to ek meri apni thi maa main jiske paas rahta tha
tumhi to meri ek apni thi jo naraaz ho jaye to kuch bhi acha nahi lagta tha
maa tumhari haan tumhari vajah se hi to main khud apne paas bhi rahta tha
dada dadi pyaar karte hain mujhe nana nani bhi aate rahte hain
aap aur papa alag ho chuke janta hun main par wo samjhate rahte hain

saara din ache se kat jata hai maa
kai baar tujhe bin yaad kie din kat jata hai maa
papa aate hain to mere saath khoob khelte hain
der se bhi aate hain to mere paas aake haalchaal lete hain
main unki majboori samajhta hun aur vo bhi samjhte hain
kabhi kabhi vo mujhe khilate khilate tumhe yaad bhi karte hain
main jaanta hun unhe kaam ke silsile me aksar bahar rahna padta hai
phir bhi saara din ghar par hi rahte jab bhi chhutti ka din hota hai
bahar jaate bhi hain to ghar par call kar meri khabar lete rahte hain
main kuch khaya ya nahi school se aaya ya nahi poochte rahte hain
school se bhi main maa time par hi ghar aa jata hun
apna homework kar thoda, khelkar so jata hun
lekin maa din jaisa bhi jaye raat bin tujhe yaad kare nahi kat.ti
thaka hara hoke agar jaldi so bhi jaaun raat me neend hai khul jati
maa phir tumhari bahut yaad aati hai bahut mujhe tadpaati hai
band aakhon me tu dikhti bahte aasuon me teri lori sunai deti hai
maa main kaise tujhe apne in lamhon ka dard sunaaun
raat aane ke dar se maa main shaam se hi ghabraaun
maa aap aur papa kyun alag ho gaye?
maa aap aur papa kaise alag ho gaye?

so kabhi bhi divorce ka khyal apne mann mei na laye.

[chitrala]

I dont understand poetry... but I can appreciate it... wah kya kavita hai... Bharmaar saa'b ke baad aap bhi... maine apni zinfdagi mein itni achchhi kavitayein nahin padhi...taaliyaan :clap::clap: for Shaadab and Bharmaar.

[jeetiaf]

par shadab sahab, aapke yahan agar sapne mein yaa skype mein chat karte waqt bhi teen baar talaq likh do to divorce ho jata hai, ab galti se shohar ne sapne mein talaq bol diya to bacche ka band baj jayega naa:rolleyes:

jeetIAF

[dollyg]

Im in a mood for poetry as well....

arz kia hai
waah waah kya aap ho
Waah waaaah kya aap ho
aap mere baap ke baap ke bhi baap ho
waah waah waahhhhh


another good one


main subah utha
maine bahar dekha
are waah
ye gol sa bindi ke maafik kya tha?
arey ye to suraj tha
maine parda kheecha
aur phir so gaya


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah

[chitrala]

Im in a mood for poetry as well....

arz kia hai
waah waah kya aap ho
Waah waaaah kya aap ho
aap mere baap ke baap ke bhi baap ho
waah waah waahhhhh


another good one


main subah utha
maine bahar dekha
are waah
ye gol sa bindi ke maafik kya tha?
arey ye to suraj tha
maine parda kheecha
aur phir so gaya


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah
Aap to bahut gehrayi mein doob kar likhti hain. just like Bharmaar and Shaadab:D

[raniraja]

aap to bahut gehrayi mein doob kar likhti hain. Just like bharmaar and shaadab:d

अल्फ़ाज़ तो सिर्फ़ एक बहाना है,
गहराई तो सिर्फ़ एक पैमाना है.
कसम बुरा करने वाले की, ढक्कन,
इस बोतल का तलवा ही अपना निशाना है.


वाह वाह वाह...

[smellyfinger]

अल्फ़ाज़ तो सिर्फ़ एक बहाना है,
गहराई तो सिर्फ़ एक पैमाना है.
कसम बुरा करने वाले की, ढक्कन,
इस बोतल का तलवा ही अपना निशाना है.


वाह वाह वाह...

Ajab kahaani hai zindagi ki, ghalib.
Botal khuli to shahenshah ban gaye they.
Khatam hui to talwe chaat-tey reh gaye.

[Shadab]

par shadab sahab, aapke yahan agar sapne mein yaa skype mein chat karte waqt bhi teen baar talaq likh do to divorce ho jata hai, ab galti se shohar ne sapne mein talaq bol diya to bacche ka band baj jayega naa:rolleyes:

jeetIAF

Sapne mei toh log bahut kuchh kar jate hai but agar chat se aur wives ki family mei kisi se yaa phir phone se 3 baar talak talak talak kah diya toh talak ho jata hai.

Samjhe janab :)

[raniraja]

ajab kahaani hai zindagi ki, ghalib.
Botal khuli to shahenshah ban gaye they.
Khatam hui to talwe chaat-tey reh gaye.
सचमुच अजब कहानी है ज़िंदगी की,
शाम हुई, बोतल खुली, अपुन ग़ालिब बने,
जिस तिस को शेनशाह बनाए, जिस तिस को फक्कड़,
सुबह हुई, नींद खुली, अपुन ढक्कन के ढक्कन.

कोई देखे तलवे,
कोई शाही जताए,
जान, इतना ना इतराना तुम,
बेशक आज है, कल महरूम.

[soniya 2]

Im in a mood for poetry as well....

arz kia hai
waah waah kya aap ho
Waah waaaah kya aap ho
aap mere baap ke baap ke bhi baap ho
waah waah waahhhhh


another good one


main subah utha
maine bahar dekha
are waah
ye gol sa bindi ke maafik kya tha?
arey ye to suraj tha
maine parda kheecha
aur phir so gaya


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah


uuufff, cha gai aap to , awesome . +rep to banta hai .

[dollyg]

uuufff, cha gai aap to , awesome . +rep to banta hai .

thank u thank u ....hard to find kadardaans of fine poetry like mine these days! :goodjob:

isi baat pe arz hai...

" Suno are suno kadardano,
Kadardano meherbano,
peeche mudke mat dekho,
aage khamba hai....
crash"

WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah

[soniya 2]

thank u thank u ....hard to find kadardaans of fine poetry like mine these days! :goodjob:

isi baat pe arz hai...

" Suno are suno kadardano,
Kadardano meherbano,
peeche mudke mat dekho,
aage khamba hai....
crash"

WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah


it was fab !
Meri ankho main khushi kay ansoo aa gaye aaj to ....

[dhurandhar]

Im in a mood for poetry as well....

and I am in mood for Dhurandhari twist:D
arz kia hai
waah waah kya aap ho
Waah waaaah kya aap ho
aap mere potey ke baap ke bhi baap ho
waah waah waahhhhh
Try this on your hubby and let us know:D


another good one

Baburao ki aapbiti
main subah utha
underwear se zaan.k kar dekha
are waah
ye gol sa chhed ke maafik kya tha?
arey ye to navel tha
maine parda kheecha
aur phir so gaya:D:D


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah

short massage hi to hai:D

[dollyg]

short massage hi to hai:D

Waaah waah aapko suraj bhi ched nazar aata hai!

[dhurandhar]

Waaah waah aapko suraj bhi ched nazar aata hai!

dollyji...dhyan se padhiye.....woh kavita baburao ki aapbiti hai:D

[shuklabhramar5]

I dont understand poetry... but I can appreciate it... wah kya kavita hai... Bharmaar saa'b ke baad aap bhi... maine apni zinfdagi mein itni achchhi kavitayein nahin padhi...taaliyaan :clap::clap: for Shaadab and Bharmaar.

Chitrala ji nice comments ..bahut achchhi ek kahani kavita bn gayi ..bachche ki puri dastan-e-gham bayan karti ek sundar bhabhivyakti ..dhurandhar ji ke sath aap ko bhi badhayi ..divorce ..maa baap ka alag rahna ..juda hona nishchit hi kashtdayak hai ek khalipan adhurapan bachche ke mn me ....:clap::clap:

shuklabhramar5
duniya se jane vale jaane chale jate hain kahannnnnnnnnnnnnn....